tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6226912073376351967.post4496824177168717225..comments2009-09-08T22:24:08.391-04:00Ari Collinshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07227340986313844290noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6226912073376351967.post-71034704420746036942009-09-08T22:24:08.391-04:002009-09-08T22:24:08.391-04:00Thanks, Allie!abbreviatedmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07227340986313844290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6226912073376351967.post-69243534728312306342009-09-05T23:17:07.969-04:002009-09-05T23:17:07.969-04:00What a powerful story in so few words. Wow.Alliehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16688259930865787451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6226912073376351967.post-45070080883894986272009-09-05T18:30:32.481-04:002009-09-05T18:30:32.481-04:00Thanks. A lot of people seem to like this one. I spend so much time with them I can't tell anymore, so I appreciate it!abbreviatedmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07227340986313844290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6226912073376351967.post-34690853018737430972009-09-05T17:38:58.316-04:002009-09-05T17:38:58.316-04:00Great story and great revisions (from the draft in the forums). I liked the original title, but the story is still fantastic.Jacksonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13439913815164976793noreply@blogger.com